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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Atlas on 29/1/2013, 1:24 am

Really nice job Josh, I like background stock choice. Just a bit too topaz'd

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Post by Josh Designs on 29/1/2013, 4:05 am

Figured id get on the desktop background grind

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by todgott on 29/1/2013, 12:48 pm

Josh Designs wrote:stock backgrounds here i come?


Theres very little of the small details, which i adore in a piece. I mean, they might've been there, but you topazed the sh** out of them. Nice lighting, but the lack of details makes it look a bit plain.

Josh Designs wrote:Figured id get on the desktop background grind


The rigged edges of logo seem a bit distracting and (maybe this is just me) the cracks seem a little... cheap?
Overall, adding little more color would help Smile


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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Josh Designs on 31/1/2013, 5:33 am

A collab i did with a friend

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Tuff Tiga on 1/2/2013, 2:47 am



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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by DoYouPlay_RS on 6/2/2013, 5:45 am



Have I improved? Razz
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Aezure on 6/2/2013, 2:25 pm

DoYouPlay_RS wrote:

Have I improved? Razz

Honestly, that hurts my eyes. Way too much going on there and it took me about 20seconds to figure out the render looks soft of like a pokemon or something. I'm not sure I like the text being slap bang in the middle either.

Now I've spent a few minutes trying to make sense of it... I do like the sort of depth-flow. As you move from right to left you sort of get drawn in.

Pfft I've said sort of too much, so Ill shut up now.
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Broeder on 10/2/2013, 11:16 am

Its not really grunge, too much straight edges for that
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by PredatorGFX on 10/2/2013, 2:30 pm

What the?! Atlas was banned?! Why?!
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by todgott on 10/2/2013, 6:02 pm

PredatorGFX wrote:What the?! Atlas was banned?! Why?!

He had been rep abusing and admitted to that. This is not the topic to talk abt that anywayz.

DYPRS - so chaotic... very high contrast with no bright light sources doesn't help. Lacks depth and variety of colors. Text placement is centered, which on this piece could be the worst place to put it. Not very fond of the ''freestyle'' text font.

^based on this, no, you haven't improved...
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by PredatorGFX on 10/2/2013, 6:58 pm

I know this isn't the right thread, but rep abuse is supposed to be -500 reps. Why is he being made different?
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Post by Drakan on 10/2/2013, 7:03 pm

PredatorGFX wrote:I know this isn't the right thread, but rep abuse is supposed to be -500 reps. Why is he being made different?

This isn't the thread to discuss this, but the best explanation in my opinion would be due to the fact he made another account, which is also breaking the multiple accounts rule, which holds the BAN punishment.

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by PredatorGFX on 10/2/2013, 8:14 pm

Drakan wrote:
PredatorGFX wrote:I know this isn't the right thread, but rep abuse is supposed to be -500 reps. Why is he being made different?

This isn't the thread to discuss this, but the best explanation in my opinion would be due to the fact he made another account, which is also breaking the multiple accounts rule, which holds the BAN punishment.

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Would he be allowed to return on a new account? This section won't be the same without him.
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Drakan on 10/2/2013, 8:19 pm

PredatorGFX wrote:

Would he be allowed to return on a new account? This section won't be the same without him.

That is at the discretion of an Admin(s), if they allow it, he may return on a new account. But as I said, Please do not discuss this here, it is off-topic. :/

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by DoYouPlay_RS on 10/2/2013, 9:10 pm

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Josh Designs on 10/2/2013, 10:02 pm

tellin you man stop using just two colors its just not a good way to finish a tag.
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by DoYouPlay_RS on 10/2/2013, 10:04 pm

Josh Designs wrote:tellin you man stop using just two colors its just not a good way to finish a tag.

That one was made before I got the tip from you. I'll try one today with more than 2 Smile
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Josh Designs on 10/2/2013, 10:15 pm

K msg me when your making it and ill help you out. This is what i made today.

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by PredatorGFX on 10/2/2013, 10:21 pm

I like the typography and the lighting, but those are the only things I like. It feels very empty and the render is very hard to see.
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Josh Designs on 10/2/2013, 10:22 pm

PredatorGFX wrote:I like the typography and the lighting, but those are the only things I like. It feels very empty and the render is very hard to see.

Its right there in the middle if your having trouble seeing it. Razz
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by todgott on 10/2/2013, 10:37 pm

i think what pred meant was that the fog/haze effect kind of overwhelms the whole sig. I understand what you were going for, maybe just little less of that effect would be better Smile
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Jiggie on 11/2/2013, 5:24 am

Josh, it's nice, but it's very boring because there is no contrast. That's why pred says it is hard to see.
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Magic on 11/2/2013, 8:19 am

PredatorGFX wrote:I like the typography and the lighting, but those are the only things I like. It feels very empty and the render is very hard to see.

This. Plus, the random red strokes take away from the focal and mess with the lighting under the arms.
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by todgott on 11/2/2013, 6:09 pm

Magic wrote:
PredatorGFX wrote:I like the typography and the lighting, but those are the only things I like. It feels very empty and the render is very hard to see.

This. Plus, the random red strokes take away from the focal and mess with the lighting under the arms.

Can't really agree on that, Magic. They actually compliment the sig very well and are providing it with a nice dynamic aspect, which it needs.
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Josh Designs on 12/2/2013, 2:35 am




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