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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Kelly on 19/1/2013, 7:24 am

DoYouPlay_RS,


Completely agree with Josh on the font. If I didn't already know what it said, I wouldn't be able to read it. The render seems over-sharpened at some points, and I think adding a little bit of other colors in there might help (like a gradient map on low opacity, soft light/overlay) to tone down the intensity of the pink and purple, as they go well together, but seem to be too much all at once.

I like the ball C4D's you used, you should send those to me sometime in IRC, they're really catchy - you used them on your most recent SOTW too and I adored them. I also like that the render is completely new and unseen (to my eyes at least) and not a render used a lot Razz

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Kitty Alex on 19/1/2013, 5:01 pm

My attempt is pretty different from most things i see here. maybe thats because i have a different view on it Smile

Anyways, what do you guys think? I'd like some critisism actually, it'll only improve my sigs Very Happy


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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Broeder on 19/1/2013, 5:08 pm

Looks like you just put ugly text on some random wallpaper or stock image
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Kitty Alex on 19/1/2013, 8:11 pm

that was kinda what i was afraid of.... so... ima upload something else i made before which isnt that good either, but kinda apprieciated in that clan.


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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by helloim96 on 20/1/2013, 10:52 am

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Kitty Alex on 20/1/2013, 12:39 pm

hey helloim, what do you use for your background?
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Kelly on 20/1/2013, 6:58 pm

Kitty Alex wrote:hey helloim, what do you use for your background?

It looks like he enlarged the render and applied a few adjustment layers or filters to it, such as blurring

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by PredatorGFX on 20/1/2013, 9:47 pm

Kitty Alex wrote:My attempt is pretty different from most things i see here. maybe thats because i have a different view on it Smile

Anyways, what do you guys think? I'd like some critisism actually, it'll only improve my sigs Very Happy


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I can tell you've been having fun with my blue lights folder.
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Kitty Alex on 20/1/2013, 10:10 pm

Well it was a seriuos attempt predator, but im still learning.


Thanks kelly, i watched some videos about it and ill see what i can no next.... but school has to come first sadly.....

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by PredatorGFX on 20/1/2013, 11:29 pm



I like this piece, but does anyone want to nit pick any faults for me?
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by DoYouPlay_RS on 20/1/2013, 11:37 pm

PredatorGFX wrote:

I like this piece, but does anyone want to nit pick any faults for me?

Looks like a broken image to me
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Kitty Alex on 21/1/2013, 4:39 pm

Ok retry:
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by helloim96 on 22/1/2013, 6:49 pm

Sorry i didn't reply kitty, i enlarged the image, went to filters, went to noise, pick put all the options to 100% the guassioned blurred
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by helloim96 on 22/1/2013, 7:21 pm

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Broeder on 22/1/2013, 7:24 pm

You should work on blending your render with the rest of your sig helloim96, either by feathering/smudging/layering/c4d's/other effects
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by helloim96 on 22/1/2013, 7:25 pm



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'll try it now and edit my post thanks broeder
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Leakee on 22/1/2013, 8:14 pm

Opinions on my signature I'm wearing now?
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Broeder on 22/1/2013, 8:34 pm

Helloim, better but pay great attention to how much you blur because theres a fine balance line between enough and too much blurring

Leakee, its ok. Could use better colors. Not a fan of those kinds of sigs anyway
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by PredatorGFX on 22/1/2013, 9:46 pm

Opinions? I don't often make tags, but I was looking for resources on deviantART and just thought it would be perfect within a signature.

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Kelly on 22/1/2013, 10:56 pm

Predator,

Good tag, but there is way too much Topaz usage. I think you have an overuse of intense pink, too, not enough other colors/shades. Take your current signature, for example, blue is the main theme, but you see a light cyan, a darker blue, even some white. Those shades bring out the tag more.

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Ross L on 22/1/2013, 11:00 pm

Kelly wrote:Predator,

Good tag, but there is way too much Topaz usage. I think you have an overuse of intense pink, too, not enough other colors/shades. Take your current signature, for example, blue is the main theme, but you see a light cyan, a darker blue, even some white. Those shades bring out the tag more.

WHAT IS TOPAZ?!

Everypne keeps going on about it, I feel so left out :c
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by PredatorGFX on 22/1/2013, 11:22 pm

Ross L, I plan to teach everyone Topaz Labs when teams are released.

Also, I love the look of a Topaz Clean finish, Kelly. It looks so clean and detailed. As for the colour, you're most likely right. I have my laptop connected to my 40" HD TV, and it looks bright pink on that, but on my laptop screen, it looks more purple with a nice pink mixed in at the bottom. Sometimes, I don't know which screen to trust as everyone's monitors are going to show slightly different colours depending on the brightness of their screen.
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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Atlas on 23/1/2013, 1:04 am

Ross L wrote:
Kelly wrote:Predator,

Good tag, but there is way too much Topaz usage. I think you have an overuse of intense pink, too, not enough other colors/shades. Take your current signature, for example, blue is the main theme, but you see a light cyan, a darker blue, even some white. Those shades bring out the tag more.

WHAT IS TOPAZ?!

Everypne keeps going on about it, I feel so left out :c
Ross L, don't feel left out. Topaz is a photoshop plug-in filter that costs about $30 I think? Topaz Clean is used to, ofc, clean up certain areas with a piece... It is mostly overused now, but with the right settings it can improve a piece... Wrong settings, your piece is practically screwed (and by wrong settings I mean too much of it.) Using too much of it really makes a piece look very very very very unrealistic, in other words fake.

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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Josh Designs on 23/1/2013, 8:32 am



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Re: Artistic Blur CnC Pit

Post by Atlas on 23/1/2013, 4:28 pm

It's a nice piece, Josh Designs. Like todgott said though, it is a little bit too chaotic. Eye-catching too Smile

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