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Post by Josh Designs on 15/2/2013, 11:11 pm

Hey guys so most of you know how this works post up your work and designers on the site will give constructive criticism on your piece. If your looking for tons of compliments on your work this might not be the place to post it.

Just a few rules-

- When giving CnC you MUST quote the art piece you are talking about.

- Be mature dont just drill a tag and not give any ways to improve it.
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Post by Josh Designs on 16/2/2013, 10:15 am


Ill start this off.

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Post by Broeder on 16/2/2013, 10:18 am

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Good composition, nice color composition but the blending of the render into the rest could have used a lot more help. Its the weakest element of the sig and clearly shows. Use effects to hide or at least distract from the clear feathered/low opacity parts
Text is good except for your name which should be 1 or 2 px to the right, and on the whole could be a little closer to the render.
Border doesnt really add to the sig, im sure theres better alternatives for this tag
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Post by PredatorGFX on 16/2/2013, 9:35 pm

On an unrelated note, what's going to happen to Artistic Blur CnC Pit?
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Post by Inhaps on 16/2/2013, 9:58 pm

PredatorGFX wrote:On an unrelated note, what's going to happen to Artistic Blur CnC Pit?

Artistic blur has been disbanded. Josh told me to close all the AB threads.

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Post by Josh Designs on 17/2/2013, 11:19 pm

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Post by PRISM on 17/2/2013, 11:45 pm

Josh Designs wrote:

Its ok, theirs an overlay of some sort which im not very keen of. Id guess its a gradient map. It just calls all my attention to the text which seems to be over the gradient map layer. besides that i like the flow of it.
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Post by Josh Designs on 17/2/2013, 11:51 pm

PRISM wrote:
Josh Designs wrote:

Its ok, theirs an overlay of some sort which im not very keen of. Id guess its a gradient map. It just calls all my attention to the text which seems to be over the gradient map layer. besides that i like the flow of it.

Makes a lot of sense

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Post by DoYouPlay_RS on 18/2/2013, 2:48 am

Havent done a B&W sig in a while. I think it's among the worse ones for me, but what do you guys think

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Post by Tuff Tiga on 18/2/2013, 4:04 am


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Latest one. Cnc please

Post by Simaas on 18/2/2013, 2:59 pm

JUST FINISHED ! Smile

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Post by Inhaps on 18/2/2013, 3:56 pm

Noob, Tuff. You can merge topics too, you know.

Any way...

Simaas wrote:
JUST FINISHED ! Smile


It feels rather lacking. See if you can change the boring sky blue you have now to something more cyan and slightly less saturated; that way the purple will create a nicer contrast.

Edges are not very smooth, aliasing artefacts are still visible in places.

I think it would look better if the black filling of the text were lighter; something like a really dark, desaturated blue, instead of pitch black. SOMEWHAT LIKE THIS BLUE

I would also suggest checking how it looks with further displacement of the 3D object. Currently the text looks cut up but in a rather unspectacular way.

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Post by Broeder on 18/2/2013, 4:01 pm

Tuff Tiga wrote:
Could have looked alright without the text, but a: the text isnt good and b: it somehow causes you to look at the sig more which for me made me see that the sig isnt actually as good as it looks at first glance Smile. Could use a border
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Post by Tuff Tiga on 18/2/2013, 4:09 pm

Broeder wrote:
Tuff Tiga wrote:
Could have looked alright without the text, but a: the text isnt good and b: it somehow causes you to look at the sig more which for me made me see that the sig isnt actually as good as it looks at first glance Smile. Could use a border

Someone gonna die tonight Razz thanks Broeder Very Happy

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Post by Josh Designs on 18/2/2013, 6:30 pm

flower LOL your text isnt bad Tuff if you would would have removed the border and made your script font a dark color found within the sig!!!!! it would have been better. But its defiantly not bad, and a lot better then others here on the site.
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Post by DoYouPlay_RS on 18/2/2013, 6:47 pm

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Post by Broeder on 18/2/2013, 6:54 pm

Whats the blue doing there?
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Post by Josh Designs on 20/2/2013, 6:53 am

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Post by todgott on 20/2/2013, 4:12 pm

DoYouPlay_RS wrote:

When a bunch of people have told you not to make 2-3 colored tags several times, why, oh, why do you think its a good idea to do otherwise???!?!?!?!?!? -.-

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Post by Aezure on 20/2/2013, 5:00 pm

todgott wrote:
DoYouPlay_RS wrote:

When a bunch of people have told you not to make 2-3 colored tags several times, why, oh, why do you think its a good idea to do otherwise???!?!?!?!?!? -.-

Technically that isn't 2-3 colours, its 1 Razz
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Post by Broeder on 20/2/2013, 5:43 pm

Technically its several hundreds/thousands of colors
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Post by todgott on 20/2/2013, 5:58 pm

Broeder wrote:Technically its several hundreds/thousands of colors
Actually those are different shades of 2-3 colors...
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Post by Aezure on 20/2/2013, 6:07 pm

todgott wrote:
Broeder wrote:Technically its several hundreds/thousands of colors
Actually those are different shades of 2-3 colors...
I only count shades of orange. I'm not counting the lighting effects, blue splashy thingy or black.
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Post by DoYouPlay_RS on 20/2/2013, 7:38 pm

Josh Designs wrote:

todgott wrote:
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Best one ive seen from you imo Smile

When a bunch of people have told you not to make 2-3 colored tags several times, why, oh, why do you think its a good idea to do otherwise???!?!?!?!?!? -.-


I realize this. The thing im struggling with is HOW to implement different coloring.
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Post by Broeder on 20/2/2013, 7:49 pm

First think of how you go about coloring your pieces, and then dont do it like that Smile
Im guessing you end sigs with gradient maps?

Josh:
Text sucks, shame on you. Id say remove your name and leave the logo thingy
His beard looks odd as hell...
Im not too fond of the effects around his neck.
And the colors are quite flat around his and in the background closest to that. Not too sure how to fix that precisely, but im sure a combination of adjustment layers like gradient maps and contrast layers would do
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